Poésie!

A toi !!
…………….

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gPXMbsH55KA

Perdu entre de fous émois,
Je te cherche parmi des brumes,
Quand la nuit m’apporte en écumes
Tes dires sans trace de toi….

Sur mes p(l)ages soufflent des airs
Que tu retiens en folles rimes…
Mais au bout de mes vers sans cimes
Je te sens entre ciel et terre (mer)….

Serais-tu cet ange perdu
Que les nues me renvoient la nuit,
Quand triste (tout seul) je me sens ici ?

Ou ce faux spectre revenu
D’un doux âge passé qui luit
Sous mes pas, le jour et la nuit ??? !!!

8-1-10 (04h 25mn)

¡Bonito!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eAHIaQJLCQA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JRLjpXLEp1A&feature=related

The wretched desert takes it's form, the jackal proud and tight
In search of you, I feel my way, though the slowest heaving night
Whatever fear invents, I swear it make no sense
I reach through the border fence
Come down, come talk to me

In the swirling, curling storm of desire unuttered words hold fast
With reptile tongue, the lightning lashes towers built to last
Darkness creeps in like a thief and offers no relief
Why are you shaking like a leaf
Come on, come talk to me

Ah please talk to me
Won't you please talk to me
We can unlock this misery
Come on, come talk to me

[Chorus 1:]
I did not come to steal
This all is so unreal
Can't you show me how you feel now
Come on, come talk to me
Come talk to me [x2]

The earthly power sucks shadowed milk from sleepy tears undone
From nippled skin as smooth as silk the bugles blown as one
You lie there with your eyes half closed like there's no-one there at all
There's a tension pulling on your face
Come on, come talk to me

Won't you please talk to me
If you'd just talk to me
Unblock this misery
If you'd only talk to me

[Chorus 2:]
Don't you ever change your mind
Now your future's so defined
And you act so deaf and blind
(And you act so deaf so blind)
Come on, come talk to me
Come talk to me [x2]

I can imagine the moment
Breaking out through the silence
All the things that we both might say
And the heart it will not be denied
'Til we're both on the same damn side
All the barriers blown away

I said please talk to me
Won't you please come talk to me
Just like it used to be
Come on, come talk to me
I did not come to steal
This all is so unreal
Can you show me how you feel now
Come on, come talk to me
Come talk to me [x2]

I said please talk to me
If you'd just talk to me
Unblock this misery
If you'd only talk to me
[Chorus 2]

Merci pour le partage de ce beau poème !
Poème dédié à celle qui est loin de toi et dont le manque rime en émois!

Un poème très fort en expression du manque et de solitude..la solitude faisait et fait toujours l'un des thèmes riches chers aux poètes..
j'ai beaucoup aimé merci amigo

Merci à vous zeha et Nacer!!

La solitude c'est un état d'âme mélancolique entre un manque déchirant qu'on vit esseulé et un espoir qu'on cherche a forger et que tu as très bellement exprimé dans ce poème.

Merci Driss!

Merci friend pour cette appréciation qui me touche au coeur!!
C'est bien vu et dit!!