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jalal
Nombre de messages : 7
Localisation : Salé
Emploi : prof
Loisirs : travelling,music,action films ...
Date d'inscription : 04/08/2010
 |  Sujet: Love poem  Sam 7 Aoû - 4:44 | |
| What is love ?
Love is a candle lightening our lifeLove is a boat showing us the way in this lifeLove has no color, no nation, and no raceLove has a magic power on everyone’s faceLove is so sweet like cheeseLove is a cure to our diseaseLove is short in length as a wordLove is a gift given to us from our lordLove is really deep in meaningLove is in deed a holy feelingLove is the difference between evil and goodLove is a magnificent bird living in a woodLove is a fire that warms us in cold winterLove is a knife in a body full of angerLove is what we should keep in mind day and nightLove is what we should teach our children in factLove is a precious present you can offer to the love of your lifeLove is simply the secret of this lifeLove is in brief you and meLove is what I feel if you could believe meIf only all people could forget about their quarrels and learn this by heart. Writen by Jalal | |
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jalal
Nombre de messages : 7
Localisation : Salé
Emploi : prof
Loisirs : travelling,music,action films ...
Date d'inscription : 04/08/2010
| | Sujet: Re: Love poem Sam 7 Aoû - 5:06 | |
| This is my first experience in poetry.Please accept this humble poem. | |
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Anne
poétesse
Nombre de messages : 1664
Localisation : France
Emploi : aide médico-psychologique
Date d'inscription : 21/02/2010
| | Sujet: Re: Love poem Sam 7 Aoû - 6:29 | |
| Bonjour Jalal...
Je viens de lire votre poème. J'ai aimé la façon avec laquelle vous décrivez ce qu'est pour vous l'amour. Des mots simples qui décrivent bien ce sentiment.
Merci pour ce premier partage et à bientôt. | |
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abdennacer loukah
Admin
Nombre de messages : 10309
Localisation : Meknès
Emploi : prof
Loisirs : lecture..musique ..voyage
Date d'inscription : 08/01/2007
| | Sujet: Re: Love poem Sam 7 Aoû - 11:38 | |
| Jalal you are welcome ...Thanks a lot for your poem. | |
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Driss Boudhan
Admin
Nombre de messages : 13504
Localisation : Nador
Emploi : Professeur
Loisirs : Musique,lecture,poésie,photo....
Date d'inscription : 02/02/2008
| | Sujet: Re: Love poem Dim 8 Aoû - 10:44 | |
| Love is in brief you and me
Love is what I feel if you could believe me
Welcome Jalal! | |
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jalal
Nombre de messages : 7
Localisation : Salé
Emploi : prof
Loisirs : travelling,music,action films ...
Date d'inscription : 04/08/2010
| | Sujet: Re: Love poem Dim 8 Aoû - 14:22 | |
| Thank you all for your comments. | |
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chennOufmed
Admin
Nombre de messages : 6208
Localisation : Meknes/MOrOccO
Emploi : PrOf
Loisirs : reading...
Date d'inscription : 08/01/2007
| | Sujet: Re: Love poem Lun 9 Aoû - 18:19 | |
| you are welcome jalal. i liked your love poem. | |
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jalal
Nombre de messages : 7
Localisation : Salé
Emploi : prof
Loisirs : travelling,music,action films ...
Date d'inscription : 04/08/2010
| | Sujet: Re: Love poem Sam 14 Aoû - 9:55 | |
| Thank you my teacher.Don't you remember me,I was your student in 2002. | |
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chennOufmed
Admin
Nombre de messages : 6208
Localisation : Meknes/MOrOccO
Emploi : PrOf
Loisirs : reading...
Date d'inscription : 08/01/2007
| | Sujet: Re: Love poem Sam 14 Aoû - 13:43 | |
| i do remember all my students/friends; but it's too difficult to make it out from this picture.it will be a pleasure to see an old friend again after so long atime. | |
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